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Tangled Obsessions's avatar

I truly loved the honesty in this post. It mirrors my own feeling that sex is often taken far too seriously. Your ability to look back at the awkward and even funny 'tangly bits' is fantastic. I'm actually working on an erotic fiction piece from my own experiences, and it's funny, I hadn't thought to incorporate some of those less-than-perfect, more humorous moments. You've absolutely inspired me to include these elements; it feels like that dose of reality could make the fantasy even more vivid.

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Gabriel Baker's avatar

Great story with an interesting thought provoking twist

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Jahlen's avatar

Sounds vaguely like the old Penthouse Forum letters I read when I was a kid.

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chris j's avatar

Ultimately disappointing for you all but only a brief moment in otherwise beautiful proceedings, box ticked if you’ll excuse my pun. 😁

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